undercover_bombshell Posted May 8, 2009 Share Posted May 8, 2009 Can't believe I've never posted in here. I used to write poetry all the time. I should get back on it. My most recent is probably two years old. Explosions Too good to care make your plans and keep them Destroy the thought of freedom A push, a shove, ignored Let the flame of fear ignite. Watch it explode begin to implode the whole of itself exhumed Feel it erode A soul on its own In a plan of destruction sold. Scratch out the truth rewrite the words continue to spread a sense of fear A fear that controls the minds of the naive. Scramble our thoughts you're too blind to see the devastation and shame you have put on our lives. nice job! and since i'm here another lol Seven Years Seven years No more tears Seven years Release my fears Why did you never show When you know I desperately needed you so Don't you call yourself a man Someone else was holding my hand Multitude of things to prove It's up to you to make the move No longer bitter just saddened it's true Cause I never meant a thing to you So wherever you are I hope you burn You had your fun now it's my turn. ~~~~~~~~~~~~ the fury of a woman scorned bye now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mona Posted May 11, 2009 Share Posted May 11, 2009 I like the simplicity and loose structure. It brings across the relaxed, introspective, dreamy feeling of lying on the grass. Thanks! It's sort of what it is, and most of my poems are introspective, and usually "happen" at a certain place. You know, listen to Nine Inch Nails more depressing songs and you'll sort of get it. Here's another one from my tumblr: It always gets darker Sometimes I wonder, With rage and thunder If the universe is right, and life’s a constant fight I want to tear a big hole, In my chest and my soul But I knew it all the time, and I’m just wasting my time It’s pointless, this screaming, when it’s nothing but dreaming And although I keep kicking, the time is still ticking, And I wonder when it will be, that I can stop kicking to be free and.. Revenge/Reward Head in knees Dirt under my nails The wrong succeed When all else fails I lay hurled You’ll pay the price An escaping world I’m breathing ice You will hear And you will see Pain and fear Will set you free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 In restless veins there floats a dream a missing link - a torn up seam The thread that kept these thoughts apart has broken up with will to start I once knew love - as living man The kiss of heart - the touch of hand It starts as rough as it will end I need the key to share - my friend In whispers I see gloom of night In hidden shadows - hidden sight The urge to feel - to ease the pain The need to love returned again In restless veins there floats a dream a missing link - a torn up seam In twisted motions kept from sight I'm not lonesome of this night Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 I have seen my name in the sand Washed away by the sea The raven is colored by autumn Disgusted by pieces of me I opened the door to your laughter Yet you were nowhere there to be found I fall and crush to the pavement Pieces are left on the ground Humble distortions are fading 'Cause my name is gone with the sea The raven colored the atumn Inspired by pieces of me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 I fear the treasure is hidden too deep this time My haven has lost its magic and hope seems hopeless Maybe these mornings where ment for mourning mending with the broken memories of the night It's not okay anymore to see the ignorance and still don't let go and I have hoped for too long - it's not in me that these empty conversations get filled with empty words So kill me and leave me be - shed the spawn the life whom was never granted Leave me be and I will eat your misery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Too broken to remain Have no will - I can't sustain Too lonely to give in a soundless tear rolls down my chin Too naked to conceal is it dream or is it real? Too left alone to see never meant for it to be Feeding from desire I force you into open fire Shattered tears fall to the ground I cannot live - forever bound Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carla Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Instead of posting new threads for each poem, why don't you post them all in the poetry thread? http://board.muse.mu/showthread.php?t=57926 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 I like this one a lot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 I like this one a lot. Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MarenKinnear Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Instead of posting new threads for each poem, why don't you post them all in the poetry thread? http://board.muse.mu/showthread.php?t=57926 Oh, I didn't know I could. Will do that the next time, thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popey Posted May 14, 2009 Share Posted May 14, 2009 Hey MarenKinnear, just merged your threads with this one to keep all the poetry in one place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Contrad!ction. Posted May 23, 2009 Share Posted May 23, 2009 Blood. The pitter-patter of droplets falling to the floor. I did this. I killed her. With one word. One terrible word. Feeling. The terrible curse. Emotions twist inside me. Their bodies unravelling inside mine. It hurts too much. I close. A cold hard shell. Lost. There’s nothing left. Nothing to say Nothing to feel Nothing to feel. She’s gone. I cannot see through tear-rimmed eyes. The pitter-patter of droplets falling to the floor. You did this. You killed me. With one word. One terrible word. It seems to work better with the word 'her.' The formatting's a bit sucky, but basically the second bit is written by the woman the man 'kills.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Priad-Luabe Posted June 2, 2009 Share Posted June 2, 2009 We are all to blame... the agony and the shame Everything we do is in vein... can you feel the pain Regress into your fantasy... avoid the truth Escape this broken dream... escape your broken dream This i dedicate to the void... an untitled to the nu-named This i dedicate to the world... to the world of the unknown Suppress reality... suppress our fear ...An untitled for the un-named Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 22, 2009 Share Posted July 22, 2009 My imaginary friend, I ask for recognition, you offer no reply. It's just me here, fighting in the dark biting to be free. "It's time to go back in again" I say and then I go back in. The lie that I have built around you is tied up now with many things. I must learn to lose the lie and find my empty space again. I will live a better life I know I have no other choice. My imaginary friend you had many times to speak many times to show your favour but you never did not for me, not now, not ever, goodbye. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 25, 2009 Share Posted July 25, 2009 It's lovely, but it also contains effort, so I probably won't try it. It looks great though, genuinely. It makes it look like a love-letter that someone's tried to keep safe despire efforts to destroy it. That said, maybe it ought to look a bit more crumpled? I hesistate to say that cos I don't want to ruin it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 26, 2009 Share Posted July 26, 2009 It's lovely, but it also contains effort, so I probably won't try it. It looks great though, genuinely. It makes it look like a love-letter that someone's tried to keep safe despire efforts to destroy it. That said, maybe it ought to look a bit more crumpled? I hesistate to say that cos I don't want to ruin it. Thanks! I may have to give it a bit of a crumple! It's weird that you say it looks like it has been both destroyed and kept because I felt quite hurt by the person I wrote it about so there was a part of me that wanted to destroy it but I also wanted to keep it safe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 Swiftly bladed arms, Soars across the ice, oh ho! the mighty penguin. [/haiku] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
crazy_chocobo Posted July 29, 2009 Share Posted July 29, 2009 Shall I compare thee to a winter’s day? A harsh whirlwind with a desolate love Showing the true side with bare blissful way Blankets covered like an innocent dove. The grim reality that you’re holding Sends shivers down the deepest of spines Icy impressions begin unfolding As the once love inside your eyes declines Yet forever for me, you’ll be my heart Great times that we spend now, you can’t deny For as it seems, alone, I fall apart And without your cold touch, I truly die So let’s live on, my dark December night And through our troubles, our love will take flight "Based on Shall i compare thee to a summer's day... obviously ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pistol Star Posted August 7, 2009 Share Posted August 7, 2009 I wrote this after watching the film Zeitgeist that Matt has segments of in his myspace profile. I read it again today and noticed the similarities between it and what Matt's been mentioning, like the world as a chessboard and the banking situation. The Backroom Zoo AJ Edwards 22 November 2008 I was born free in the mind Before corruption began to climb We all flew high with our wings outstretched Famine, depression, and power farfetched But now our stage is presently aware Of all the surroundings too delicate to care Governmental lies and religious fakes Those who do not care for what this makes The stories unravel their carpets of red Inviting you to join their feast of the dead Waging their wars for sole personal gain Sixty years of rule, never refrained The fragile manipulation of your mind And distrated intoxication not left behind Like children playing chess with fake wooden pawns The powerful banks control monetary throngs Well-oiled machines raring--ready to go A well-dressed businessman could never say no Nor, presidents of past have ever been slaves No, the smiles on dead faces will never fade When explosives bring down our common enemy The False Flag band-aid is their remedy When the heart of the beast has awaken the chance For the New World Order to continue a romance Investment frauders orgy mortgage desire They line their pockets with wild green fire For the truth of the matter lies not in the age But beneath the surface, not far from the stage A haunting ghost forshadowing the effect Return for the money, a hand to collect Systematic system and classification prevail To document lost souls doomed to burn in hell A light in the sky offers peace in the land But the light is a rocket, decimating our plan So when we are tired of suckling from the media Look up 'terrorist' in an encyclopedia See the names of all the intelligent crew Who try to wage war against me and you Not the bums living in some far off cave But the ones who have subjected us as slaves Blinding our judgement with fear-mongering tactics Like trading with people outsourcing galactics So if we choose to be free once again We must force evil off into its bitter end For we are a kind linked from our essense And must wrought upon our own convalescence An instinct of survival too human to ignore Starting to collapse the cold metal door If we keep our sense of what was behind The future will be born free in the mind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DejaEntendu Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 This my very amateurish attempt at poetry and feel free to appraise honestly, i'm under no illusions as to my talent level i just like writing for some reason i also have a sorta story beginning but that's even more of a work in progress.But seriously any feedback/comment would be greatly apperciated.(Sorry for the one americanism but couldnt find an alternative) I am John Doe,this is my mask, my mask as pale as the white hue of the corpses, who line the pockets of men and who live as footnotes on spreadsheets I am John Doe,the time is 00:00 on the day after judgement. The day of the Burning Sun which our wax wings will never reach: for as long as many will struggle,and few will fight, no one will win I am John Doe and i have been dead for as long as i have lived, a patriot without a nation, a soldier without a war the voice of every fallible soul who tried, and the heart of those that didn't I am John Doe,and this is my Brother. He shares with me the glory of defeat, and the agony of victory,but to my blind eyes he will never be seen I am John Doe,and on this grassy metropolis lie the strewn remains of a ramshackle habitat and the neat,orderly bodies.Whom i survey, with blood on my hands and string in my spine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
incineradma Posted August 13, 2009 Share Posted August 13, 2009 as the leaking dries up, who is there to pull the plug? it's done. I'm busy now forgetting what it is that's come the seeds are growing, as steadily the sun shines down, questions and their answers of why and where we came from Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DejaEntendu Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 I gaze upon the shimmering moonlight,wavering alongside a single hair, floating above her eye's emerald delight. Delight;so pure,magnificent,unattainable and rare,a woman of beauty unadorned luring me to these shores of want and despair. Despair;spoken in the burden of an exhaled sigh,and then as the gentle rhythms of her body and the water inhaled,so did I. Slowly i kneel at the pool of darklight , which so often had plagued me and brought me here tonight. Tonight;with each minute gone another fragment of reality departs,but still her warm smile grips my once empty heart. Heart;the fragile petals balancing on the end of a stem,vibrant and intoxicating but prone to falling apart again and again. And as my constant friend in the sky remained,so did my captive emotions,who's sheer presence made me question if anything would be the same. Same;as my endless routine or her even complexion, from who's wisdom i now realise that life is no longer my affliction. Affliction;the pain i once felt,the fear of being alone,but i now i see that if fantasy is all i can know, then her comforting embrace shall be my cradle,this lake my home Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DejaEntendu Posted August 14, 2009 Share Posted August 14, 2009 as the leaking dries up, who is there to pull the plug? it's done. I'm busy now forgetting what it is that's come the seeds are growing, as steadily the sun shines down, questions and their answers of why and where we came from I realy like the first two lines,also admire the succint yet profound nature epsecialy after two years of being told to rein my work in and it still not happening. Take my english coursework which was a ridiculous concept, that could be best summed up as a botched attempt at merging a modern thriller with the dystopian reality of suburbia and Dostoevskyian moral/social commentary, that ended up way over the word limit and with a rushed/forced ending anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted August 15, 2009 Share Posted August 15, 2009 I gaze upon the shimmering moonlight,wavering alongside a single hair, floating above her eye's emerald delight. Delight;so pure,magnificent,unattainable and rare,a woman of beauty unadorned luring me to these shores of want and despair. Despair;spoken in the burden of an exhaled sigh,and then as the gentle rhythms of her body and the water inhaled,so did I. Slowly i kneel at the pool of darklight , which so often had plagued me and brought me here tonight. Tonight;with each minute gone another fragment of reality departs,but still her warm smile grips my once empty heart. Heart;the fragile petals balancing on the end of a stem,vibrant and intoxicating but prone to falling apart again and again. And as my constant friend in the sky remained,so did my captive emotions,who's sheer presence made me question if anything would be the same. Same;as my endless routine or her even complexion, from who's wisdom i now realise that life is no longer my affliction. Affliction;the pain i once felt,the fear of being alone,but i now i see that if fantasy is all i can know, then her comforting embrace shall be my cradle,this lake my home Beautiful <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DejaEntendu Posted August 16, 2009 Share Posted August 16, 2009 Beautiful <3 Thanks il admit that one took me longer than most of my writing, so heres one thats a bit rougher round the edges(i just wrote it tonight) Here we are, me and you,you and I We’ve been down this weary road so many times And as the echoes of time debate why You tell me that the aging creaks on my face are surely a sign But if there symbolic or physical you wont let me know Maybe there just landmarks on our journey to a final home Of course you never asked if i wanted to go, Just as i remained tactless,with my sharp judgemental tone We both consider what we hear below,the pearl droplets swirling in a dirty basin Last Cleaned a long time ago, back when these pearls were just a twinkle in our eyes When we would cast light out into the Shadow and there was always a dream to be chosen But now of all our furtive decisions, none or more consequential than the colour of our ties We gaze into each other, and see not the future but a burden When what happens next is the last thing we want to consider And eventhough of this impending darkness we are certain We’re still throwing up our lines from the director who casts us as sinners. And as the lights are dimmed, and the curtains are slowly drawn I tell you that this is goodbye ,atleast until tomorrow And if i don’t make it past the mournful break of dawn I know that you will see a blank wall and not sorrow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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