ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 This will probably fail spectularly, but it'll be interesting to see the results if it doesn't. I'll have a go at a short one to start with. See all the colours, reflected in water Cousin Butterfly and Uncle Rainbow Just like summers in paradise Dreams comes true once more. That's as much as I can feasibly think of for now, it was bit influenced by the track I'm listening to at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 ive went down when I fell i fell so fast dropping like the panes in an hourglass- wait, i better turn the foos off first! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 ive went down when I fell i fell so fast dropping like the panes in an hourglass- wait, i better turn the foos off first! Music in the background might actually help this, though Grohl yelping and grunting perhaps not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Okay. A mounting chasm There's not one spasm in his mind right now Between him and true destiny there is one light One light which blinds all else but leads him on and on Like a tightrope he could fall and lose everything His pride, his dignity, all he values. But now, the moment of truth. He rises upwards, plunging his sword into the air As the monster quietens and falls to the ground The warrior is not satisfied. And full of adrenaline. He starts off to adventures new. (music: Requiem for a Dream, Clint Mansell Remix for LOTR) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Okay. A mounting chasm There's not one spasm in his mind right now Between him and true destiny there is one light One light which blinds all else but leads him on and on Like a tightrope he could fall and lose everything His pride, his dignity, all he values. But now, the moment of truth. He rises upwards, plunging his sword into the air As the monster quietens and falls to the ground The warrior is not satisfied. And full of adrenaline. He starts off to adventures new. (music: Requiem for a Dream, Clint Mansell Remix for LOTR) I like this, it's epic within one verse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Just like a snowdrop falling It's precious and fragile Winter is calling And forever makes me smile. When the sun comes Just hide yourself away Watch the foxes run Into the bright new day. Music - Siberia by Charlotte Hatherley. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 I like this, it's epic within one verse. Yeah its amazing what you can do simply on train of thought. I'll stick this on my thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Yeah its amazing what you can do simply on train of thought. I'll stick this on my thread. And the music actually really does help, it can change one's outlook and therefore their verse in the click of a finger. Also, I've added you as a friend on LJ, hope that's OK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Just like a snowdrop falling It's precious and fragile Winter is calling And forever makes me smile. When the sun comes Just hide yourself away Watch the foxes run Into the bright new day. Music - Siberia by Charlotte Hatherley. Aww, I'm thinking of lots of little hibernating animals now. And the music actually really does help, it can change one's outlook and therefore their verse in the click of a finger. Also, I've added you as a friend on LJ, hope that's OK. That's cool, I only just made it today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Aww, I'm thinking of lots of little hibernating animals now. That's cool, I only just made it today. I only made mine properly today, you're my fourth friend on there, I look forward to future bloggings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 I've just noticed. I repeated the words "One light" Now what film score was I listening to? /doh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 I've just noticed. I repeated the words "One light" Now what film score was I listening to? /doh! Haha, it worked well in the poem though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Tripping over wires These limbs are flailing My will is tired My will is failing She'll never forget The night we met But now I'm falling And life is stalling. (Charlotte Hatherley - Dawn Treader) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mausengeist Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 It's funny how the strangest things Come back at'cha in the end, The candy floss and the scaffolding Held up as my only friends Labyrinths are cakewalks And straight lines are living hells, Myriad by myriad I'm falling, climbing wells ...*rolls next joint* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elzapan Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Whats up paper cut? What the fuck paper truck? I dunno, paper bow. What the hell? Christmas bell! Cant remember the rest but it was a conversation me and my friend were having earlier Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Little Animal Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Harm's cattle roams what lies beneath Below black, below blue Like doom-soaked earth gnomes do Pulled down by sugar-rotten teeth Care's flock floats up above Over orange, over opal As a joy-flushed fairies' ball Its buoyancy the devil's love That came uot of nowhere, thank God I'm not a poet. (listening to iTunes shuffling between Nirvana and the Amelie soundtrack) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ScarredEyes Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 Harm's cattle roams what lies beneath Below black, below blue Like doom-soaked earth gnomes do Pulled down by sugar-rotten teeth Care's flock floats up above Over orange, over opal As a joy-flushed fairies' ball Its buoyancy the devil's love That came uot of nowhere, thank God I'm not a poet. (listening to iTunes shuffling between Nirvana and the Amelie soundtrack) Sounds a bit like Dylan Thomas, I like this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuffitv3 Posted March 3, 2008 Share Posted March 3, 2008 Sitting on the ground Just fumbling around Wasting away my time Write down a little rhyme Thinking of a girl so fine Elated that she is mine This weight feels as heavy as a rock But it's only a ticking clock Yah it needs to be spring break already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 Heavy sacks, My brain can't track Nor fingers clack. To my sack I pack Would be the wisest tact. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokamak Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 So far people never see the way they care about how they don't and yet they won't because they simply don't. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mausengeist Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 Bellbottoms blueberries All dusted with ice, Flinging down the fetters To the chocolate mice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutDaFucksy Posted March 4, 2008 Share Posted March 4, 2008 Why did you leave? Where did you go? Sorry to hear, I was a little slow... But now you've gone, Never to come back. And im all alone, On the beaten track... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mausengeist Posted March 5, 2008 Share Posted March 5, 2008 On the cadence of your every word, I watch and wait And sharpen the talons you gave me. Something redder than the sunset Shall spill from the skies tonight... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 5, 2008 Share Posted March 5, 2008 A crashing lightning bolt as a painter works feverishly As the shadows walk around him he glances upwards His paling face, his whiting head, eyes wide and staring It is almost as if something stalks his house, invisible. His painting, only visible by the moonlight, is beautiful A crippled smile of pride enlightens his face. They said it would never come to anything. Happy he was wrong, he retired. The sneaking shadow ripples like the pipes of an organ White fingers clasping the edge of the painting And licking it away into the night The door shuts with a slight jingle. His age knows no bounds now, his skin has sunk so low So wizened by the ages, none can bare this blow Perhaps the gallery has written his name Alas, breaking heart, no. The ghostly man glitters, his eyes like his sacks A cry of no again, Screams and burning The painter dies with his work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artarita Posted March 5, 2008 Share Posted March 5, 2008 You could of been number one... You could of had so much fun.... :LOL:nah I'm kidding....umm... I paid a pickle a nickle he was so fickle that he wasted away so thus I got my nickle back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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