joemckie Posted November 21, 2012 Share Posted November 21, 2012 Just some of my lyrics, would be quite interested to hear opinions - I will post the songs once they are recorded, should be within a month Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 Constricted (verse1) So now it comes to pass / that all turns to dust, Your vibrant eyes / the ones that used / to call from the wreckage/ and keep me alive... Now they've lost / their shimmer / and crumble, I hear your voice / as you falter and stumble, Your soul is arrayed / with the trinkets of torment. (chorus) I will suffer For you no more You've burnt your bridges And your memories are drawn The skies will sear As God's patience is worn And I no longer love you (verse 2) Countless years / spent searching for dawn The light of the sun / such a distant / memory for all And though my heartbeat spreads chills all around me My mind is a fire / my body a foundry You cheated me once / I'm no longer alone (chorus) (ending) Falling away, falling away from you And I'll whisper your name, falling away from you Too little, too late, falling away from you So sick of the games, falling away from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 Maybe today we'll be together, And tomorrow we will fall, I need you more than ever, Listen to my spirit call, Out from amidst destruction, Deep within a tortured soul, Maybe today we'll be together, But tomorrow we will be alone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted November 21, 2012 Author Share Posted November 21, 2012 I don't care if I get ignored, Just please don't break my ideals (just realised I nicked that from shine, oops!) I'm just a pauper trying to please the queen, If anything, leave me my dreams. And I feel a change coming on, Like the rise of the first sun Bringing light and life to the universe God gave me this gift, But this gift is a curse. And it hurts to think that the divide Between the mountain and the sea, is like you and me I see heaven in my dreams, and I wait for them To come for me and set me free. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PanicStationofCydonia77 Posted November 22, 2012 Share Posted November 22, 2012 The lyrics for the first song had some really vivid imagery. I Like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted November 22, 2012 Author Share Posted November 22, 2012 The lyrics for the first song had some really vivid imagery. I Like it thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tom//P Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 Awesome. Interesting to see how they work in the song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jobby Posted November 28, 2012 Share Posted November 28, 2012 I'd say I like the first one most, there's some good metaphors/imagery in there Is this a thread where for other people to share some of their lyrics too, or is there already a thread for that? I know there's a poetry one but there's a bit of a difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 5, 2012 Author Share Posted December 5, 2012 I'd say I like the first one most, there's some good metaphors/imagery in there Is this a thread where for other people to share some of their lyrics too, or is there already a thread for that? I know there's a poetry one but there's a bit of a difference. Thanks man! #1 is my favourite by far too, also our best song in my band (in my opinion ) This wasn't intended as a thread for everyone's lyrics but this forum does lack one so be my guest, let's start the Musers lyrics thread!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 5, 2012 Author Share Posted December 5, 2012 Awesome. Interesting to see how they work in the song. Cheers man! We're actually recording most of these lyrics on my band's EP, if you want to keep in the loop we're on Facebook here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlissfulPlugInBaby Posted December 6, 2012 Share Posted December 6, 2012 Just gotta say, I really like your lyrics!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darksky Posted December 11, 2012 Share Posted December 11, 2012 I love the 2nd one I guess I'll use those to make an own song (don't panic, I won't release it in any form) Maybe I'll post one or two own lyrics too if this will become a Musers lyrics thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jobby Posted December 11, 2012 Share Posted December 11, 2012 Maybe I'll post one or two own lyrics too if this will become a Musers lyrics thread Guess we might as well I'll post one of mine that I sort of finished recently (there are some bits that I need to add on at the end) when I can find the notepad I wrote it in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 I love the 2nd one I guess I'll use those to make an own song (don't panic, I won't release it in any form) Maybe I'll post one or two own lyrics too if this will become a Musers lyrics thread Go for it dude I'd love to hear it if it gets finished! It's a slow one for me, the lyrics have no music yet and post yours when you get a chance, would love to actually have contributed something back to the board Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 Guess we might as well I'll post one of mine that I sort of finished recently (there are some bits that I need to add on at the end) when I can find the notepad I wrote it in. Looking forward to it mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1UWMbroMvY4 Seeing as people seem to enjoy the lyrics, I recorded a quick acoustic of Constricted - it's rusty but heyho, you can see it in song now! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ybkbHG9Zsk Another one of mine, pretty new! Lyrics (note, I don't sing most of these in the video...) (verse1) I lay under your skin It's what I eat (Oh you're so good) And what I hunger is you Under your skin I feed on you (And when the time is right) Then your soul is mine (chorus) I'll always find a way To rip you into little pieces I'll always find a way To tear your heart in two (verse2) I know you want lies The fuel to your fire I starve on your freedom, baby (chorus) I'll always find a way To rip you into little pieces I'll always find a way To tear your heart in two I'll always find a way To rip you into little pieces I'll always find a way To break even your tomorrow, yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted December 22, 2012 Author Share Posted December 22, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xE08SZQsvQ8 Here's a band one, only a quick rehearsal demo though! Lyrics (verse1) I've seen your birth And I hold the fire I know your reckoning Your mind's desire (chorus) Fool, feed me apathy, yeah (verse2) I have no time For such a liar The world will cut you out In a trial by fire (chorus) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim59 Posted February 9, 2013 Share Posted February 9, 2013 Is it still ok for anyone (me in this case) to post their lyrics in this thread? I'm too scared to post them anywhere else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted February 14, 2013 Author Share Posted February 14, 2013 Is it still ok for anyone (me in this case) to post their lyrics in this thread? I'm too scared to post them anywhere else. Post away! If people are interested and this takes off I'll get a mod to change the name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tim59 Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Cool, thanks Will post some soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dave. Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Here are some lyrics for a song my band are writing. I'm quite happy with them Otherminds Do You feel? Do you know how to? Can you love? Do you know how to? Will you fool me? You know how to. Chorus The Problem of other minds Am I loved or truly blind? Are you really sweet and kind Or just another auto-mind? Pointless piece or heroic savior Destined journey or doomed endevour Oh faux god, why is it? Ministry experiment? Truman's own entertainment? Can will I fight or just lament? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will_ Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Well... this is my first full lyric... It's rather dark, but it's based on some rather dark experiences in my life so I guess it would be Point Blank/Death Stare At point blank, it surrounds, in around, all encompassing sounds Claws at sleeves, gnaws at soul, encapsulates A death stare, full view, no view, all view, no view It struggles from within, (yet) outside and in It forces you, to listen to the loud Thump thump thump, ever faster A death stare, full view, no view, all view, no view But a bright light cries as the closed box flies (in moonlit skies) Back it rushes A death stare, full view, no view, all view, no view Back it rushes Back it rushes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kueller Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 lyrics I did like it. Would hear more, could go well with good music. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will_ Posted February 14, 2013 Share Posted February 14, 2013 2edgy4me I did like it though. Would hear more. Thanks dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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