Woah, I've just read BD till the end. I think the book took me 3 days. Okay...

At the end I thought... Okay nice story but waaaaay to protective:

- Nobody dies except for one, but she was kind of a betrayer so it doesn't really count.

- Bella saves the day with her second strenght: because she can also skip the New Born part.

- Did I already mention that nobody died? To Bad... Nobody died! Nobody Died! (I'm sorry XD I had to kind of quote her thank you paragraph about muse XD)

- Bella was kind of... Or no... the whole vampire being are so... only thinking of the sexual part XD I guess all vampires develop an addiction towards the subject XD Funny that SM makes Bella look a like an addict without ever writing about the situation itself.

- The biologic part. She/Carlisle tries to make it look so obvious that Vampires have 25 chromosomes and werewolves (excuse me shapeshifters) have 24 and humans 23. But how the heck is THAT possible? The werewolve part... okay I can see that since it's genetic. The vampires part I do not understand. Does the venom somehow add 2 chromosomes to every living cell in their body? I like the use of scientific facts to explain something that your brain made up. But please use it the right way and do not claim things that just can't be true! Don't claim to know and explain something in a biologic way when even highschoolbooks makes you understand it's impossible.

For the end. I would have like some more loss (and not being afraid to loose some of the made up characters. I know it's hard to let go of them. but in the end you should, because else it's just not a good story. I makes it look like today's childrens shows on television where none of the good guys ever dies. There should have been a fight with the Volturi. They should have beaten their asses, or had to come to an understanding after the fight. To be honest I just expected this fight to come. All those preperations and nothing serious happens. Reneesme and Jacob didn't even flee. They should have to come back later. They also give Bella credit for saving them. Okay she helped, but Alice did the big job by getting this halfvampiremale with her.

And I never got the clue of the famous book (Marchant of Venice?) she had to burn. Why? Or did I miss something?

Hmm... all those criticpoints... maybe a good thing that I want to become a publisher.

But I did like reading the book however I was kinda addicted. (How else could I ever read a book like that in 3 days?)