joemckie Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 The lyrics got quite a bit of love on my lyric thread, with quite a few people interested in hearing how it would work in song... so I did a quick acoustic version for you guys! My band will be recording it fairly soon in a few weeks, so I will post the full version when it's done! http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1UWMbroMvY4 Lyrics: (verse1) So now it comes to pass / that all turns to dust, Your vibrant eyes / the ones that used / to call from the wreckage/ and keep me alive... Now they've lost / their shimmer / and crumble, I hear your voice / as you falter and stumble, Your soul is arrayed / with the trinkets of torment. (chorus) I will suffer For you no more You've burnt your bridges And your memories are drawn The skies will sear As God's patience is worn And I no longer love you (verse 2) Countless years / spent searching for dawn The light of the sun / such a distant / memory for all And though my heartbeat spreads chills all around me My mind is a fire / my body a foundry You cheated me once / I'm no longer alone (chorus) (ending) Falling away, falling away from you And I'll whisper your name, falling away from you Too little, too late, falling away from you So sick of the games, falling away from you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will_ Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 I like it, but it feels a liiiiitle long to me... You could take out the ending and just end on the second chorus... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
joemckie Posted January 1, 2013 Author Share Posted January 1, 2013 I like it, but it feels a liiiiitle long to me... You could take out the ending and just end on the second chorus... Ah its a big epic with the band trust me the acoustic version could probably do with trimming though I agree Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will_ Posted January 1, 2013 Share Posted January 1, 2013 Ah its a big epic with the band trust me the acoustic version could probably do with trimming though I agree Haha, fair enough, I'll wait to hear the band recording Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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