Travisx2112 Posted July 11, 2012 Share Posted July 11, 2012 Here's some tunes that I've recorded over the past few months They're just rough drafts, so they're not too fantastic, but let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Travisx2112 Posted July 11, 2012 Author Share Posted July 11, 2012 63 views and no comments? :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Snake Bonzai Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 As demos they are alright but still too messy overall. As the People probably has the most potential so try and build a bit more on that. Ask yourself where you want to go with the music and strive to achieve it in an accessible state. It's easier for outsiders to understand if there is less mess and more of a steady melody. Since one of the songs is called intro, I assume you have envisioned an album of some form, I am sure there is some idea behind it all. Would be glad to hear new versions of these. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Will_ Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 Obviously need tightening up big time, but I like Sitar and Intro. Gonna listen to Drum Thing too edit: Yeah, Sitar and the intro. The other two were ok but not my thing really Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Janoh Posted August 8, 2012 Share Posted August 8, 2012 Personally I don't have a big problem with the demos. They're not as unlistenable as some people are making out but obviously they would benefit from some improvements. Did you write and record everything yourself? (vocals, guitar, drums, sitar?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muser20 Posted August 9, 2012 Share Posted August 9, 2012 Quite good! are you making yourself the instrumental + vocals ? think i can see some inspiration in your instrumental Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Becky101 Posted August 9, 2012 Share Posted August 9, 2012 Here's some tunes that I've recorded over the past few months They're just rough drafts, so they're not too fantastic, but let me know what you think Not bad, I like Drum Thing and As The People the best. Sitar and Intro seemed like too much was going on and it wasn't together well enough, or not structured well. Another thing is to make your voice strong and confident. It was good, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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