Strawberry_Juice Posted September 27, 2008 Share Posted September 27, 2008 It looks like Iambic Pentameter... And it seems you've read a bit of Chaucer. Nah, more like anapaestic tetrameter, though it's not purely anapaestic... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted September 28, 2008 Share Posted September 28, 2008 Nah, more like anapaestic tetrameter, though it's not purely anapaestic... The one I said is the only one of these 'meters' I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eye of Harmony Posted October 7, 2008 Share Posted October 7, 2008 twisted and gnarled tree reflection from my mind's eye gripped in delusion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted October 9, 2008 Share Posted October 9, 2008 I listen to songs of passion and fire, you don't know my lust, don't know my desire. sitting in darkness, sucking in light, waiting for you, my lord of the night. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 not specifically off my head. But I wrote a song yesterday thatI'm pretty proud of... I can see it sometimes like a distant star, Looks like you can touch it, but it's so far away. We run to catch it, in our arms, It leads us blindly, burns us up so fast. Hoping, Dreaming for a miracle, mmmm, Chasing cars and tails like a dog. Find us, help us, bring us, home. Will you come, to join us To be blinded in our joy? Joy for a, pot of gold, at the enf of a rainbow. But you're wise, unlike us, Didn't think so. Hoping, Dreaming for a miracle, mmmm, Chasing cars and tails like a dog. Find us, help us, bring us, home. Find us, help us please, bring us, home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunnerthekiwi Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 What brought us together, Can't keep us together, For we've grown up, And we've grown apart. Is it foolish I cherish, A feral desire, To leave you a space in my heart? Do you still remember, Or is it just me?, The nights we shared, In un-adult sense, Silent for fear they were listening. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carrotie Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 When the wind blows And the sky snows The little boy Likes his toy He wanted to build a snowman But his mother said no way man So the little boy cried And everybody died I just owned you all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gunnerthekiwi Posted October 10, 2008 Share Posted October 10, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted October 13, 2008 Share Posted October 13, 2008 Clumps of matter, do we matter? Well you matter, matter to me. Distant star, to far to touch, and if I could, you would just burn me. Solidity just an illusion, compressed to fusion, I burn with yearning. Your matter's best, no way to test, the way I feel, with zeal I'm learning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted October 15, 2008 Share Posted October 15, 2008 Can't cross my fingers, to whom do I pray. While I wait what can I do. It's common as muck, so why am I surprised? why the shock and the worry? can't touch wood, to whom do I bow my head? as I wait for the news, what do I do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
milkybar=] Posted October 15, 2008 Share Posted October 15, 2008 haikus are easy but sometimes they dont make sense refrigerator Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
trvrphlps Posted October 15, 2008 Share Posted October 15, 2008 har har i have a nob a nob with a job and that job is you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted October 15, 2008 Share Posted October 15, 2008 har har i have a nob a nob with a job and that job is you Dip at your place? Oh well you're both pretty horny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 take a walk, with me, let's talk, you'll see. I miss you, You don't care. I love you, But I'm like thin air. You smile, I nod. We Laugh, At your job. You miss me, I don't care. You love me, But now you're just thin air. -siiiigh- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naget4music Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 this is not mine... this is a friends. I see a FISH I see a CAT I want to eat A CHICKEN WRAP hehehehhehehee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 spinning and twisting, falling with style. laughing and smiling, what a way to die ^^ im quite proud of that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 Zoids two? Zoids two? They colour them red instead of blue, and then they call them zoids two. Writen by my boyfriend! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 take a walk, with me, let's talk, you'll see. I miss you, You don't care. I love you, But I'm like thin air. You smile, I nod. We Laugh, At your job. You miss me, I don't care. You love me, But now you're just thin air. -siiiigh- I liek it cos it's a bit random liek. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 Ode to a Happy Relationship How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh, to echo jokes as students pass, At least he's not a psychopath, You'll think, then growth and seeds at last. How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh, Later on, when nerve has passed, We'll grow some more, confident until abashed, When deeds are doing, rings passed. How you'll giggle, how you'll laugh. Before I pass, will I hear at last, How you giggle, how you laugh? I'm annoyed that I couldn't give it quite the proper structure of a sonnet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 i wrote it off the top of my head to put on my dA: At Sea: Silent, mysterious, wonderful blue, A huge expanse of a gorgeous hue. Tiny ripples break across the surface, As if, underneath, there is some great furnace. It looks so dead, yet so alive, It is so quiet, yet so full of life. Small creatures, swim in the light, While the bold and heatbroken wander in the night. The depths of this sparkling, nauseating sight, Are hardly seen, as what is down there will bite! So here we sit, floating who knows where, Insignificant against its majestic grandeur Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JackAndrews Posted October 21, 2008 Share Posted October 21, 2008 glistening in the starlight are your lips so sweet id kiss. but once again i say no word, i sit, i stare, youre bliss. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted October 25, 2008 Share Posted October 25, 2008 On the stairs do you see me? In the night, where I live. on the air do you follow me? All a shiver when I see you, skin alive with excitement. On the stairs where I see you. A bit shite but hey:p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rage Kitty Posted October 31, 2008 Share Posted October 31, 2008 Ok... here goes Fold twice to recive Luck unfathomable The advert claimed in black and white Forty pounds Fortune told Obvious answers Make luck Make it yourself Out of tape and broken things The best charms are your charms Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted November 1, 2008 Share Posted November 1, 2008 Ok... here goes Fold twice to recive Luck unfathomable The advert claimed in black and white Forty pounds Fortune told Obvious answers Make luck Make it yourself Out of tape and broken things The best charms are your charms very cool, quite cryptic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwezza Posted November 1, 2008 Share Posted November 1, 2008 Think of a bee You are its knees Can I come round tuesday please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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