New Born Lee Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 Saved Little Poem If I could ask you, To come back, And pick me up, And sow me back together, To mend my broken phrase, To make all the women cheer, To make all the men scream, To give you laughs and pleasure, And self-esteem for days. That's right. Never come back. Never come back at all. I'm not good enough for you. I'll never be good enough For anyone. Smash me around your head, Until I am broken Into pieces. Broken by words. Invading my space, large and intimidating. You can still save me. Leave me still. Leave me as I am. Just a little poem. Leave me still. Leave me alone. Leave me as I am. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Melania13 Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 haiku freedom he sang out and before another word he was caged no more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NicePockets Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 Palindrome haiku Sorry this is not quite it MADAM, I'M ADAM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Counterpoint. Posted May 1, 2010 Share Posted May 1, 2010 This is my first one, be nice. Waiting. Waiting. She looks, glances, She can't tell of where she's going, Where she'll stop, What will happen. Beaten suitcase by her side, Overfilled with memory, Hat brimmed tipped to the evening sun, Saluting its dimming command, In the sky. Waiting. Waiting. She's ever looking forward, optimistic, Free from control of elders. 1984 household, Not anymore. No CCTV in the real world. Waiting. Waiting. The bus arriving? Slows to a halt in front of her hunched form. Ascends, tags on, And sits. She's never turning back, you know. She's leaving home. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadeddusk Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 I'm sad today. How about some depressing poetry? Ineedyou ButIcan'thaveyou Iloveyou Butyoudon'twantme Youaremymuse Imeannothingtoyou I'ddieforyou Youwouldn'tevencryforme Manypeoplesay I'mwastingmylifeaway Admiringyou Adoringyou IknowIcan'tbewithyou WhydoIkeeptrying? It'sonlybringingmedown Youwillneverloveme Myinsparationcomesfromyou Youdon'tevenknowIloveyou Youaremylife'spurpouse Youdon'tevenknowwhoIam Manypeoplesay I'mwastingmylifeaway Admiringyou Adoringyou Ican'thaveyou IknowInevercan WhydoIstillkeeptrying? Ifaileverytime It'ssuckingoutmyhappiness, Tokeeptryingandfailing ButyouaremyONLYhappiness WhichmeansI'dhavenoneanyway Iloveyou Ispendmylifechasingyourstarlight Intheend AllIget Issadness BecauseInevergetmylove Icontinuelivingon, Justbarelyholdingon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 Don't be sad *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fadeddusk Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 Don't be sad *hugs* I wish I wasn't I always am i just can't take it anymore. I'm sick of trying, sick of lying and saying I'm alright, sick of life. I wish I had some purpouse. Matt Bellamy is the only reason Im still here. It's not like anyone would miss me (okay maybe my family and like 2 other ppl, but that's it.) Im so depressed I had a dream last night about the cuts on my wrist Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hopix Posted May 3, 2010 Share Posted May 3, 2010 you fucking mother fucker, you fucking mother fucker, you fucking, fucking, fuck fuck fuck fuck, you fucking mother fucker, you fucking mother fucker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaimon Posted May 4, 2010 Share Posted May 4, 2010 you fucking mother fucker, you fucking mother fucker, you fucking, fucking, fuck fuck fuck fuck, you fucking mother fucker, you fucking mother fucker. I think we've found the new poet laureate for the UK . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaman37 Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 walking outside, thinking of what could be the gravity of my dreams beats down on me battering my frame my soul is shaken you tell me not to you give me a reason why dazed for days not sure whats real nothing is absolute i touch but cant feel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaman37 Posted May 10, 2010 Share Posted May 10, 2010 much too tired to play your games want to retire to my dreams but you keep me tethered here, in the waking world where everything is harsh and sharp, and uncertain wonder when youll unshroud your intentions i know what they are, and they annoy me im not yours to keep let me be (honestly, its first period, and i could care less about what youre saying) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaman37 Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 im baked but im not brown you see me rollin round you better run outta town cos im crazy, ill kill at a glance 'nuff ladies here to make you nut your pants -Nick, the white 16 year old from a conservative neighborhood Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NicePockets Posted May 15, 2010 Share Posted May 15, 2010 Tiptoes in the whispers Of the creaky floorboards In the back of your mind, On edge, you are waiting. Freedom fighter underground Listening without sound Make a move, quickly now 30 seconds left. Take a deeper breath Ignore the shadows in the corner Focus on your feet Right, left, right left. Keep a straighter face There's nothing in the corner Don't look, don't ever stop This could be your final moment. Freedom fighter in a hole Watch it, now you're in control Quiet, mustn't wake a soul 20 seconds left. Say goodbye to what you know What you thought you knew And step out of your life Take a look into it. Through the murky blackness You may see a light That's just your death. Keep walking forward now... Freedom fighter through the dark Forget the amusement park Make a mark, see a spark, 10 seconds left. Hide asleep in a cave Forgetting all your dreams Restless sighs and echos The end is near. Freedom fighter tries to sleep Through those dreams a shadow creeps Sweep, leap, reap. Just 5 seconds left. SLASH, CRASH, WAKE UP To the end of days The deathly shadows come to meet you The sky is red, not black. Freedom fighter lies alone Blood is running, his own -Breathe- a groan His time is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragondust Posted May 18, 2010 Share Posted May 18, 2010 Comfort in Knowing Do they deny me yet still as I yet would be foolish enough to try To be forgotten to wither away as a flower in the sun From the skies the storms speak to me I watch as they ravage and rampage time. Time like an endless sea of dust seeking comfort in knowing the essence of myself remains the same Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lensip max Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 Dishes clogging sink Saturday clean-up fail Housework is for schmucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted May 22, 2010 Share Posted May 22, 2010 The Mathematician Who Liked "Untitled" Whence I was come from poet's cave, Were I shallowed, sulked and grave. Ambitions spoiled and hope diminished, Someone called the lark "unfinished". Mulled I wine and whine and moan, Inside my head no mercy's known. And bitch'd between my selves was me, So few phrase be'd in unity. Kneeled did I to squandered time, Yet none revised there came a line. No deeper was I in my thought, So songs were slighted and forgot. 'Til all a' once frown torn a'sunder! By staggering blast- a man of number! Did he subtract a measured doubt, Of what this 'verse' be all about. And add to this, a merry gesture! "By jove, this word's a living jester!" "And this one makes my heart a-flutter!" "'Tis sure you are no cookie-cutter!" That math dog laughed, to see such fun! To him I thanked, a worthy sum! And from this way, did I grow strength, So poet grew from poemless length. But lo, I promise, though your will benign, Will't be rare should I sniff, from a tan or cosine! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mitchelluk Posted May 24, 2010 Share Posted May 24, 2010 I sawthe most romantic film ever,yesturday,well it comes close to wutheting heigts my favourite, and that's bright star it's the life story of Keats, and his love for his poetry and his wife. I love Keats as he writes deep from the heart. Anyway after seing it I thought I'd have a go today , well I've been so bored at work , doodiling , at my desk, thinking of love, ha ha so I thought I'd have a go , from the heart . Come into my garden of Eden, and lets run throgh sunflowers, and rest in natures array of beauty and wonder like angels do.Oh my darling angel it's oh so beautifal but none has your beauty. See the swans of purist White by the river entwined together always ,oh such devotion such love. They look so free yet there is freedom in true love. Oh to know what love is , and to have it always in it's purist form, is to know god. Oh l"amour est forever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrebleRose689 Posted May 27, 2010 Share Posted May 27, 2010 Ode to the grabage can (a Haiku) Filled up with your trash. Just sitting in the corner. No one understands. :LOL: Awww, poor trash Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pandaman37 Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 dead and yet still dying walking, i sigh breathe enough just to get by Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 Songs > Poems Everything Will be alright I will fall in love And it will be silly. When it's written down. In levels of poetry. It is described with verbosity and convalescence and antipathy and contradicting contradictions. Everything Will be alright I will fall in love And it will be silly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tokamak Posted June 4, 2010 Share Posted June 4, 2010 True happiness is seeing a falling star and not having a clue what to wish for Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jemzaza Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 I am eating Brie. Dominic loves tasty Brie. We've much in common. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowewolfe Posted June 6, 2010 Share Posted June 6, 2010 At a loss for words at the teeming herds ripping mind and heart hidden in the dark Pulled in every direction in still, silent sedation I'm waiting her wait... I pray she's not my fate. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LovelyRita Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 For Dom: Once again I find myself under a new illusion, Trapped in a cosmic world of noise and confusion You, you come and go as flashing as your lights, But I, I'm due to stay and watch you as you fly My heart pulse replaced the beat You pumped out in your drums, Tonight you play to someone else So what will I become? Your smile is everywhere I look But when I try to touch, You evaporate without a trace, No sign of even dust - and that was my cheesy vein coming out, no more cheesy stuff for the next 3 months Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheddatom Posted June 14, 2010 Share Posted June 14, 2010 I am eating Brie. Dominic loves tasty Brie. We've much in common. mmmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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