New Born Lee Posted July 5, 2009 Share Posted July 5, 2009 Must keep writing Safe, lonely and alone with no-one to impress Cold and temporarily frozen. Cold and temporarily frozen. I can speak only once, silent protagonist telling a faded tale. Cold and temporarily with no-one to impress Eyes losing terribly, lack of focus unnecessary A robot man who feels too much. Cold and temporarily. Doubt in temporarily. Smiling inside not good enough for anyone Feeling shot in the back and living sadly, delete, sadly untrue, cannot spell Cold and temporarily in. Repeat. Repeat is old. Stop, but cannot stop, still cannot spell, eyes fading terribly, yes. Dold and temporary. Cannot xist. Cannt exiost Cannot exit muse. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 6, 2009 Share Posted July 6, 2009 Break it quickly if you can please break me now my never ever man. Do what you will with me I can't see the truth you have no need, set me free nothing there to hold your heart is not mine if it is I have not been told. I can't carry on like this empty hands, empty heart empty kiss. Blah oh well it's what is on my mind but can't get the words right! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 Must keep writing Safe, lonely and alone with no-one to impress Cold and temporarily frozen. Cold and temporarily frozen. I can speak only once, silent protagonist telling a faded tale. Cold and temporarily with no-one to impress Eyes losing terribly, lack of focus unnecessary A robot man who feels too much. Cold and temporarily. Doubt in temporarily. Smiling inside not good enough for anyone Feeling shot in the back and living sadly, delete, sadly untrue, cannot spell Cold and temporarily in. Repeat. Repeat is old. Stop, but cannot stop, still cannot spell, eyes fading terribly, yes. Dold and temporary. Cannot xist. Cannt exiost Cannot exit muse. Aww Lee I like it, very sad though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheddatom Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 You're an emo kid You think you look cool You've got no reason to live Let me give you a few In a couple of years You'll grow out of it You'll learn to rhyme So your raps aren't shit You'll learn in time You're not depressed It's just everyone looks the same So no-one's impressed You're an attention seeker We know that much But take off your check-shirt It just makes you look butch We don't mind your pics Staring up into the camera You're young and hot But soon you'll be into CAMRA Just 'cos you'll be legal Doesn't mean you'll be lonely You can dress up as jail-bait An ironic emo-phoney! Seriously though kids Stop whining like twats Cheer the fuck up That's a KnT rap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turing Machinehead Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 There is a magic we pass down Power of the herbs, power in words.... etc etc etc ... Find me I'll be lost forever. I like it! AUTUMN Winter’s on it’s way, The Autumn breeze beckons surrender, Summer leaves, Detach from trees, So falls each leaf, In golden splendour. . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WutDaFucksy Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 Im bored, Im tired, Going out tonight, Im bored, Im tired, It'll be alright With my friends, my mates, my crew, My nights so much better without you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artarita Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 A pickle in my nickle must mean its worth more its less than a ball of cotton or a bow made out of steal pity I ran out of both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 I like it! AUTUMN Winter’s on it’s way, The Autumn breeze beckons surrender, Summer leaves, Detach from trees, So falls each leaf, In golden splendour. . Nice to see you in here! Like it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Turing Machinehead Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 Yep, I like this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 7, 2009 Share Posted July 7, 2009 Yep, I like this thread. You should write some more;) I tend to use it as some kind of therapy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 8, 2009 Share Posted July 8, 2009 Im bored, Im tired, Going out tonight, Im bored, Im tired, It'll be alright With my friends, my mates, my crew, My nights so much better without you A fine little ditty! A pickle in my nickle must mean its worth more its less than a ball of cotton or a bow made out of steal pity I ran out of both. Aww Lee I like it, very sad though. I was feeling very sad and detached at the time. However, it's emotional impact has been partially ruined by the very last word, which make it sound like I'm a deranged, addicted member of the muse messageboard. This is srs poem though. 'muse' was just the words coming as they were coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 11, 2009 Share Posted July 11, 2009 The View From Above. Ugly trees Have wrinkled barks that have no leaves. Step the roots that suck the soil, That other creatures need. I stand here and wish it was once more A puny seed. Dysfunction Is what we fondly name a family. Like our countries born and bruised and bloody We tower high above the earth Foundations in the muddy ground Without the tender hearts we wore at birth. I yearn for them, For their hearts and for their shelter. Sitting out my mountain house, At the edge of tomorrow. Alone, confused and safe, I turn, I watch and wait: The skyline, and the green. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 12, 2009 Share Posted July 12, 2009 I love Matt, love Matt Bellamy which is a shame as he's never heard of me. But I know that I don't stand a chance He'd run a mile at one single glance. Sorry I am in a stupid mood! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 15, 2009 Share Posted July 15, 2009 Edgeways/Rightwrong. I refuse to listen to you completely cognitive sentence. Your expressions and views are irrelevant telling the truth. Only my words are important and exposing your weaknesses. I am right wrong. It is your fault for taking things so seriously that insensitive. Now you're just being a douchebag about just insulting me. I think you ought to just calm down and I will not calm down. I am right wrong. Okay maybe I said some things I'm sorry I'm really not. I am just trying to stop hey hey don't hit why won't you listen? Just stop you're just being childish now what are you talking about? I am right. I am right and you are wrong. I am right. I am right and you are wrong. I am right. I am right and you are wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 15, 2009 Share Posted July 15, 2009 I am living proof of the inconsequence of my existance. Grey witch screams in my dreams. I am your dead mirror. Slip off, cut off, slip off this coil no consequence. I belong to everyone but no one your dead mirror. No need, desire no need for such things and I don't know who I am I am the dead mirror. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lalalive Posted July 15, 2009 Share Posted July 15, 2009 How good does my poem need to be? I'm afraid of my mental inadequacy It's dark here, but I don't feel alone Ironically, I'm wearing socks and a phone I have an open book sitting on my bed It's new and one that I haven't read I haven't been in this thread before I assure you I will be here much more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 15, 2009 Share Posted July 15, 2009 I am living proof of the inconsequence of my existance. Grey witch screams in my dreams. I am your dead mirror. Slip off, cut off, slip off this coil no consequence. I belong to everyone but no one your dead mirror. No need, desire no need for such things and I don't know who I am I am the dead mirror. I don't really understand it, but it's eerie enough. How good does my poem need to be? I'm afraid of my mental inadequacy It's dark here, but I don't feel alone Ironically, I'm wearing socks and a phone I have an open book sitting on my bed It's new and one that I haven't read I haven't been in this thread before I assure you I will be here much more Hehe, I realise the poem isn't entirely serious, but there's a couple of places where the syllable count is off, like the last couplet. Otherwise, it's cute! In response, there are no requirements! Just try your best! If you're feeling a strong emotion when you come onto the board, it's could be very liberating to let it all out in a good poem! Just let the words come! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 15, 2009 Share Posted July 15, 2009 I don't really understand it, but it's eerie enough. Not sure what it's about myself! nother one comming Knocking on doors that just won't open nobody is there. I have to leave because you are not here. Speaking in tongues, you don't recieve the message because you are not listening. I can feel I am dying I have to leave because you are not here. No love from the master nor the minions I have to leave, I can feel I am dying. There is something real out here within my reach in my control I have to grab it. No more comprehensible but hey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 Can't stop words keep coming to my mind Tie me up in sheets on fire in the ruffled soft desire there's a darkness never sung a secret kept you bite my tongue. Broken wood and steel springs sprung in silken blindfold I am spun land and sink and there I slide through satin sheets forever glide. We exist there lost to all outside the loveless barren call feed on me I feed on you this is all that's real and true. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 Can't stop words keep coming to my mind Tie me up in sheets on fire in the ruffled soft desire there's a darkness never sung a secret kept you bite my tongue. Broken wood and steel springs sprung in silken blindfold I am spun land and sink and there I slide through satin sheets forever glide. We exist there lost to all outside the loveless barren call feed on me I feed on you this is all that's real and true. I love the sibilance in this poem. Brings across a wooshy softness, and along with words like "bite" and "darkness", bring across a sort of delicate, dangerous dance. (ooh, get my consonance too!) The last four lines, even if they're intended as a different section (like the final rhyming couplets) bring the poem down for me. I want this dance to last allll niiight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 I love the sibilance in this poem. Brings across a wooshy softness, and along with words like "bite" and "darkness", bring across a sort of delicate, dangerous dance. (ooh, get my consonance too!) The last four lines, even if they're intended as a different section (like the final rhyming couplets) bring the poem down for me. I want this dance to last allll niiight. Thank you! I think you are right about the last lines, that's the problem I get words in my head but they are only a few and then I run out of steam Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 Thank you! I think you are right about the last lines, that's the problem I get words in my head but they are only a few and then I run out of steam Don't worry, I get the exact same thing. The poem needs finishing off and I'm never happy with it. >_< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animus Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 your heart is as heavy as stone carving itself out into the shape of our love and back into your eyes again (short simple and sweet) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Animus Posted July 16, 2009 Share Posted July 16, 2009 Okay. A mounting chasm There's not one spasm in his mind right now Between him and true destiny there is one light One light which blinds all else but leads him on and on Like a tightrope he could fall and lose everything His pride, his dignity, all he values. But now, the moment of truth. He rises upwards, plunging his sword into the air As the monster quietens and falls to the ground The warrior is not satisfied. And full of adrenaline. He starts off to adventures new. (music: Requiem for a Dream, Clint Mansell Remix for LOTR) requiem for a dream is the best!!! the song is SOOO fucking awsome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fbastidas Posted July 18, 2009 Share Posted July 18, 2009 Sitting in a corner, Browsing with fanaticism, I'm avoiding my sleep, Evading the inevitable dream trip Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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