New Born Lee Posted February 25, 2009 Share Posted February 25, 2009 Very beautiful, and hopeful in a strange way. Oh, do you think so? I was quaking in my boots when I wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 More discoveries- sorry for whoring, lol.These are kinda rough- there are things I like about them, but they're kinda unfinished. Rollercoaster of Love. Whizzing and jolting and wheeling around, Helpless, beholden to a rollercoaster. Locked in a spinning seat, my churning stomach, Painfully pushed by a metal bar. Feeling sick and turning green and greener. Can't Write Nothing! Look at me! I’m feeling nothing! Nothing, nothing at all! I’m not feeling anything! Nothing, I can’t believe it! Nothing? Nothing? Really? Nothing? I’m too aware of my writing, Because I’m feeling nothing! I’m writing because I can, And not because I want to. Nothing, I’m feeling nothing! Nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing nothing…. My Girl in the Sky. Come here, my love, and softly. Come here, my love, and pray. Try not to jump when I stop here. I can’t help wanting you the same way. Relax, and let my fingers caress you, Relax and sleep, if you desire. Wake up later, and I will be happy. Maybe then I can understand your pretty eyes. Put your hands across my ears Put your hands around me. I want to blacken your whiteness, With a little sweetness and a little daring. Now push my arm right through you, Now push it through your heart. And save me from you, the girl like a castle. My lovely girl, my girl in the sky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popelady Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 eeeeeaaaaaaaaaaah! lalalalala! no i dont believe im high! (but dont tell the curicles!) my toenails. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marie Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 Why can't I fly? Why should I fight? Tell us there's no more bread to feed our brain! choosing the other side must I lie? or must I hide? I feel no more like a godess Safe as a promess. I can't be fair I need some air. You have to breathe not to fear... I want to eat and choose the hit. I changed my life. They'll use their knife. Why pray again? It's such a pain. please do not disturb peace in suburb. Cause they' ll call me, hope I'll know what to be! I was an angel now I fly in hell... Give one penny and I'll tell the destiny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 What lies beneath seeps through, and now I see the real you, Ugly and shallow, Dead and hollow. You see depths and you try to reach, reflected depth you mirror with speech. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nimpo46 Posted February 26, 2009 Share Posted February 26, 2009 -e- At first your cry covered the sky, Now it's clear you've lost your fear, Your cry will no longer fly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ninja Posted February 27, 2009 Share Posted February 27, 2009 sair is a bear oh yeah sitting in a chair she glares at a bit of paper she will tear yeah that's sair hahaha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 Balance I've gushed with my eyes and I've gushed with pride, I've seen her fair skin and I've looked deep inside. I've been still and unmoving, then, electrified, I've drunk cooling water, and drunken pesticide. I've looked at your face and I've looked elsewhere, I've compared thee to angels and myself to a bear. I've fell and I got up, through strength of my will, Now on two feet I stand, and on them I stand still. (Based on "An Irish Airman Forsees His Death" by William Butler Yeats) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popelady Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 sair is a bear oh yeah sitting in a chair she glares at a bit of paper she will tear yeah that's sair hahaha you've inspired me! mad is sad about her dying granddad perhaps dying's a fad the poor old lad this poem is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 It's a transition, a move in the vertical. An admission, of fallibility that's all. So well done, you broke me today, was it fun? I hope you feel what I say. Don't come here, I can't stand to see your shadow, You don't stay near, and go where I can't follow. Walk up to me, I will receive you, be brave, talk to me, I will receive you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 2, 2009 Share Posted March 2, 2009 It's a transition, a move in the vertical. An admission, of fallibility that's all. So well done, you broke me today, was it fun? I hope you feel what I say. Don't come here, I can't stand to see your shadow, You don't stay near, and go where I can't follow. Walk up to me, I will receive you, be brave, talk to me, I will receive you. This sounds more of a rap or fast song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted March 5, 2009 Share Posted March 5, 2009 Rush to my lips before the fullness fades, caress my hips before they lose their shape. Hurried hands on soft skin, hurry my lover we don't have time to stop. Tones and colours in my hair, for you my love while they last. I litterally can't think of anything else to write there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted March 5, 2009 Share Posted March 5, 2009 This sounds more of a rap or fast song. Oh yeah! didn't notice that when I was writing it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JJ Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Write A Poem Off The Top Of Your Head Write a poem off the top of your head great scotts! another pointless thread may aswell post in it either way, they'll call JJ a tit this board is hardly about muse anyway it's moar about Radiohead and Bloc Par-tay I am in the Art and Poetry subforum i cannot think of anything that rhymes with subforum apart from Frodsham, boredom and erm....forum. this is the end of my very poo poem holy shit! poem could rhyme with forum i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Contrad!ction. Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 The Warning: Cows go moo, When they do a poo, They release methane gas, Which comes shooting out of their ass, and contributes to global warming, So this is your warning: Kill all cows, I don't know how, But eat them, Mistreat them, To save the place, Or I will emigrate to outer space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
New Born Lee Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 Write A Poem Off The Top Of Your Head Write a poem off the top of your head great scotts! another pointless thread may aswell post in it either way, they'll call JJ a tit this board is hardly about muse anyway it's moar about Radiohead and Bloc Par-tay I am in the Art and Poetry subforum i cannot think of anything that rhymes with subforum apart from Frodsham, boredom and erm....forum. this is the end of my very poo poem holy shit! poem could rhyme with forum i guess The Warning: Cows go moo, When they do a poo, They release methane gas, Which comes shooting out of their ass, and contributes to global warming, So this is your warning: Kill all cows, I don't know how, But eat them, Mistreat them, To save the place, Or I will emigrate to outer space. Both awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RequiemForADream412 Posted March 6, 2009 Share Posted March 6, 2009 The Carnival. There was a mighty dog, Who always had the first say, And he barked. Then a sheep came along, But the odd thing was, He barked too. Then a monkey came, And when he saw that the sheep And the dog were both barking, He barked too. Soon there was a carnival A carnival of animals, And all of them were barking. Lions and tigers were barking. Snails and worms were barking. Whales and dolphins were barking. Orangutans and armadillos were barking Ameobas and staphylococcus aureuses were barking. And it was the most boring carnival ever, Because when the children saw a cute lion cub, It barked. And when they saw a playful monkey, It barked. And when they saw an intelligent dolphin, It barked. They all barked in their faces. And their barks were very intimidating and annoying. So everybody had no choice but to bark too. Except for me. I do not bark. I sing. I love this. <333 Write A Poem Off The Top Of Your Head Write a poem off the top of your head great scotts! another pointless thread may aswell post in it either way, they'll call JJ a tit this board is hardly about muse anyway it's moar about Radiohead and Bloc Par-tay I am in the Art and Poetry subforum i cannot think of anything that rhymes with subforum apart from Frodsham, boredom and erm....forum. this is the end of my very poo poem holy shit! poem could rhyme with forum i guess It made me laugh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Contrad!ction. Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 Both awesome. Ta muchly. Id do another one but it'll end up following the lyrics of Starlight and Knights of Cydónia (the last 2 songs I listened to) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted March 7, 2009 Share Posted March 7, 2009 Your sweetness and gentleness, If I could bottle your finesse, Surely I'd be worth a mint, soft and gentle English gent. Face of purest poetry, perfect eyes and symmetry, surely words cannot express, a beauty time could not suppress. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nimpo46 Posted March 9, 2009 Share Posted March 9, 2009 Doth al logream eth munea, Calavistle en tu mey forou, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atavar Posted March 9, 2009 Share Posted March 9, 2009 俳句をpotnoodleどうすればよいですか？ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popelady Posted March 10, 2009 Share Posted March 10, 2009 俳句をpotnoodleどうすればよいですか？ haha potnoodle its genius Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
static shadows Posted March 11, 2009 Share Posted March 11, 2009 The white rabbit shifted in mounted glass case, As this sawdust blood spilled from near every place, Dry puddles on feet fell both twisting and nail pierced, Sharp bound met with a crash as it made escape fierce. Spraying scattered splintered shards across marble floor, Glass eyes rolling wild it now broke through the door. I wanted to follow, I wish that I could, But nails pierced my shell as I turned into wood. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Popelady Posted March 11, 2009 Share Posted March 11, 2009 judge me with your hushed stares comfort me with your misleading cares tear me down with your seething glares watch as im caught in your poison snares Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest QueenOfNerds Posted March 11, 2009 Share Posted March 11, 2009 Let's find somewhere to hide together, removed from space and time, removed from shame. If we run fast enough we can change it, we can live forever. Only a minute that's all we need to give us something that will last a life time. No spoken words, no need for them. Just a connection between us, between the universe. Really just words, but hey! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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