Thank you! It's a bit rough, but the deception was what I was kinda going for.
I really like your prologue. Very interesting.
I jumped in right at chapter one. And I'm not posting ANYTHING until it's edited. Hahahaha!
I want to make chocolate chip cookies but I don't want to clean up the mess, so I won't today. Also watching a stream of the Chilean miners getting rescued and all that. What movie are you going to watch?